Tuesday 2 October 2012

Tutorial 2 : Causes of accident involving motor vehicle



Brainstorming… and what I get after 5 minutes:
- drunk driving
- carelessness           
- rain
- hole on the road
- fast driving
- Do not care about the rule
- brake do not work
- do not think of the love one
- selfish driver
- light stop is not working
- reckless driving



Thesis statement
       The main causes of accident involving motor vehicle are drunk driving, unpredictable weather and condition of the car.

Topic sentences
1.    Drunk driving is bad because being drunk while driving will make driver unable to do good judgment.
2.    Rainy weather will prove to be difficult for driver to drive as the road will be slippery and driver can easily lose control over their car.
3.    The condition of the car during driving need to be in top performance so there will be no accident.

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